Hi Samantha, I went through your story and enjoyed the read. I had a little tear welling up in my eye as I thought how cool it will be for kids to be reading about part of their culture. This kind of story is long overdue and badly needed. I hope it is the first of many.
I did not see anything that would offend or in need of change. I feel you should leave the spelling “oolichan” as is, since all Nisga’as seem to spell it this way.
Thanks for giving me this opportunity and good luck with the book.
— Edward Desson Fisheries
Manager / Nisga'a Fisheries and Wildlife Nisg̱a’a Lisims Government